A "topic-prominent" approach uses words and phrases such as, regarding, in terms of, apropos, when it comes to, as regards, in respect of, as far as x…. is concerned, on the subject of, (while) on the topic of, talking of, etc. at the top of a sentence. It's sort of like a mini-title that you give your sentence before getting round to the sentence itself.
A topic-prominent approach works fine for public speaking and conversation, and is favored by other languages such as Korean and Japanese. Strong written English, however, prefers to skip the introductions and get straight to the point by beginning with the subject. You should therefore consider skipping these opening phrases.
Notice also how putting one of these topic-introducing phrases at the start of your sentence practically forces you into using the impersonal "it is" or "there is" construction (😕), or the first person "we". If the grammatical subject of your sentence is hard to find, then the meaning of the sentence remains elusive, which is not usually what you want.
Examples of sentences with (unnecessary?) topic-introducing phrases
On the subject of climate change, it is crucial that (😕) we take immediate action to reduce our carbon footprint and transition to renewable energy sources.
Regarding the recent surge in COVID-19 cases, it is important that (😕) we continue to follow public health guidelines to keep ourselves and others safe.
As far as educational policy is concerned, there is a need for (😕) increased investment in early childhood education to ensure that all children have equal opportunities to succeed.
With respect to gender equality, it is essential that (😕)we address the persistent wage gap and promote women's leadership in all fields.
In terms of technological advancements, the development of artificial intelligence has the potential to revolutionize various industries, but we must also consider its ethical implications.
When it comes to immigration reform, we must find a way to balance the need for secure borders with compassion and empathy towards those seeking refuge.
As for the future of work, it is clear that the rise of automation and the gig economy will require us to rethink traditional employment models.
With regard to mental health, we must prioritize access to affordable and effective treatment to support individuals who may be struggling.
On the topic of environmental conservation, it is critical that (😕)we work together to protect our planet's ecosystems and biodiversity for future generations.
In terms of social justice, it is imperative that (😕) we actively address systemic racism and discrimination in all aspects of society.
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