Can and could are modal verbs. Other modal verbs, those funny helper verbs
that never change and have their own tenses and moods are: should, may, might, ought to, need to, will, shall, must, would.
Can and could are
also overused , especially by unpracticed
writers who do not want to come over as too sure of themselves. Yet one of the
skills of essay writing is to sound certain or at least convinced of what you
are writing. By overusing can and
could, you are sapping your sentence of energy.
Have a look at these:
Sensationalism can result in real-life consequences.
The sentence is immediately improved by removing the
"can" (which requires an adjustment of the verb "result").
Sensationalism results in real-life consequences.
Which still sounds a bit wordy and unwieldly, so let's simplify
again:
Sensationalism has real-life consequences.
The last is by far the best. If you do not have the
confidence to be so blunt, your lack of confidence will seep into the reader's
consciousness.
Here are a few other examples
Helping others can/could be
the best way to happiness -- Helping others is the best way to
happiness.
Democracy could be seen as a form
of governance founded on a misplaced trust in the wisdom of crowds --
Democracy is a form of government founded on a misplaced
trust in the wisdom of crowds.
Do not
forget that could is the conditional. “Democracy could be seen” implies an unspoked protasis such as: If one examines it/if one were to examine
it/ if looked at from a certain perspective.
It can/could be argued that this book is
too long and tedious even for the most committed fan.-- This book is (arguably)
too long and tedious even for the most committed fan.
You should probably just get rid of the arguably
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