What is wrong with little old "to"? Not grand enough for your important essay?
In order to sound less pretentious and wordy and insecure (see what I did there?), make sure you do not use "in order to" anywhere other than at the beginning of a sentence (and even then, check to see whether a plain "to" on its own might do the job just as well).
Simpler is almost always better.
Here are some poor ๐--> ok๐-->good ๐ sentences. Remember, that even the bad sentences with ๐ are not wrong, but the alternatives are better.
๐ The candidate dressed professionally for the interview in order to make a positive impression. ๐In order to make a positive impression, the candidate dressed professionally for the interview.๐The candidate dressed professionally to make a positive impression at the interview.
๐The company invested heavily in research and development in order to maintain its competitive advantage.
๐ In order to maintain its competitive advantage, the company invested heavily in research and development.
๐ The company invested heavily in research and development to maintain its competitive advantage.
๐The applicant had to have at least five years of experience in order to be considered for the job.
๐In order to be considered for the job, the applicant had to have at least five years of experience.
๐ The applicant had to have at least five years of experience to be considered for the job.
๐Strict measures were imposed on public gatherings in order to prevent the spread of the virus.
๐In order to prevent the spread of the virus, strict measures were imposed on public gatherings.
๐Strict measures were imposed on public gatherings to prevent the spread of the virus.
๐The student had to study all the material thoroughly in order to pass the test.
๐In order to pass the test, the student had to study all the material thoroughly.
๐The student had to study all the material thoroughly to pass the test.
๐The company implemented a recycling program for its office in order to reduce waste.
๐In order to reduce waste, the company implemented a recycling program for its office.
๐To reduce waste, the company implemented a recycling program for its office.
๐The company implemented a recycling program for its office to reduce waste.
๐The business must have a strong online presence in order to succeed in the global market.
๐In order to succeed in the global market, the business must have a strong online presence.
๐To succeed in the global market, the business must have a strong online presence.
๐The business must have a strong online presence to succeed in the global market.
Just to complicate things...
Even when placed in its proper position at the start, the phrase can cause ambiguity or just seem confusing, as in the example below:
๐The concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early in order to avoid disappointment.
But also:
๐ In order to avoid disappointment, the concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early.
And just as bad is a simple "to" in the wrong place even though it usually works in this position:
๐To avoid disappointment, the concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early.
๐The concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early to avoid disappointment.
Sometimes, albeit rarely, the phrase serves a purpose by being in the middle of a sentence, as it helps avoid ambiguity, but the best of the sentences below is still the one that leaves it out:
๐The nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds to receive the grant.
๐( instead of the usual ๐ for this construction): The nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds in order to receive the grant.
๐In order to receive the grant, the nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds.
๐ To receive the grant, the nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan.
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