What is wrong with little old "to"? Not grand enough for your important essay?
In order to sound less pretentious and wordy and insecure (see what I did there?), make sure you do not use "in order to" anywhere other than at the beginning of a sentence (and even then, check to see whether a plain "to" on its own might do the job just as well).
Simpler is almost always better.
Here are some poor π--> okπ-->good π sentences. Remember, that even the bad sentences with π are not wrong, but the alternatives are better.
π The candidate dressed professionally for the interview in order to make a positive impression. πIn order to make a positive impression, the candidate dressed professionally for the interview.πThe candidate dressed professionally to make a positive impression at the interview.
πThe company invested heavily in research and development in order to maintain its competitive advantage.
π In order to maintain its competitive advantage, the company invested heavily in research and development.
π The company invested heavily in research and development to maintain its competitive advantage.
πThe applicant had to have at least five years of experience in order to be considered for the job.
πIn order to be considered for the job, the applicant had to have at least five years of experience.
π The applicant had to have at least five years of experience to be considered for the job.
πStrict measures were imposed on public gatherings in order to prevent the spread of the virus.
πIn order to prevent the spread of the virus, strict measures were imposed on public gatherings.
πStrict measures were imposed on public gatherings to prevent the spread of the virus.
πThe student had to study all the material thoroughly in order to pass the test.
πIn order to pass the test, the student had to study all the material thoroughly.
πThe student had to study all the material thoroughly to pass the test.
πThe company implemented a recycling program for its office in order to reduce waste.
πIn order to reduce waste, the company implemented a recycling program for its office.
πTo reduce waste, the company implemented a recycling program for its office.
πThe company implemented a recycling program for its office to reduce waste.
πThe business must have a strong online presence in order to succeed in the global market.
πIn order to succeed in the global market, the business must have a strong online presence.
πTo succeed in the global market, the business must have a strong online presence.
πThe business must have a strong online presence to succeed in the global market.
Just to complicate things...
Even when placed in its proper position at the start, the phrase can cause ambiguity or just seem confusing, as in the example below:
πThe concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early in order to avoid disappointment.
But also:
π In order to avoid disappointment, the concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early.
And just as bad is a simple "to" in the wrong place even though it usually works in this position:
πTo avoid disappointment, the concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early.
πThe concert organizers advised attendees to arrive early to avoid disappointment.
Sometimes, albeit rarely, the phrase serves a purpose by being in the middle of a sentence, as it helps avoid ambiguity, but the best of the sentences below is still the one that leaves it out:
πThe nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds to receive the grant.
π( instead of the usual π for this construction): The nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds in order to receive the grant.
πIn order to receive the grant, the nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan for using the funds.
π To receive the grant, the nonprofit had to demonstrate a clear plan.
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