"The characters use...."
No they do not. They are characters; they do not exist. Characters cannot "use" anything because they have no existence and therefore no agency. It is the writer, the author, the prose, the words that do all this. The characters are just other words: you have to understand this fundamental point. Lady Carlotta is no more real than the train she missed. She cannot "use" a tone to make YOU react. That's the author who's doing that
who is presented as an impulsive character
Your grasp of the concepts is still flimsy and your comments indicate
that you still misunderstand some of the concepts. But, as I said in the long
note above, you need to start by resetting your whole frame of mind when doing this
sort of stuff. Reading like a writer, like a critic comes AFTER you have read
like a reader. The idea is you read, enjoy and then go back to see how it was
done, It is at this point you need to
change your whole attitude: the
characters ar3e no longer characters but simply words on a page, and they are
not your friends; the story is being told by a voice that you may have notices,
but now need to describe. Whose is it? What tone does it have and so on.
To think outside the box is the phrase, which, being a cliché, is a favorite of people who never do.
This point of view helps the reader understand
External detail used to communicate otherwise invisibile feelings. Consider; characters can express emotions (i) through thoughts, which means the narrator must have access to their mind; (ii) through actions; (iii) through external descriptions that stand for their mood and set the mood of the text.
abode: It is sill used a lot, often on official forms and therefore sometimes in jest (of the mock-formal type).
Dialogue is used to make the narrator feel invisible: The problem here starts with the passive and the omission of agent: "Dialogue is used" By whom? By the narrator? No, because the opposite is the case: when there is dialogue the narrator is silent. So you must be talking about the author, which usually not helpful for the purposes of direct textual analysis. We don't care about the author or his sex or his politics for now, we care only about how words work on the page, regardless of author.
Consequently that verb "used" is inappropriate because it implies that there is a purpose and a use to the dialogue (or whatever else you may single out with that and similar phrases such as description is used, adjectives are deployed, paratactical structures are added etc). Passives remind the reader of the missing author.
Just say the dialogue/the long/short sentences, densely metaphorical language/finely structured sentences/ the series of exclamations/ the adverbs/ ... the whatever you're talking about do this and do that: not that they are used fior that purpose.
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